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Closed 10 years ago

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#1285 closed defect (fixed)

minor documentation typo fixes

Reported by: framer99 Owned by: developers
Priority: lowest Milestone: Barrier Breaker 14.07
Component: other Version:
Keywords: Cc:

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Index: docs/adding.tex
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--- docs/adding.tex     (revision 6226)
+++ docs/adding.tex     (working copy)
@@ -121,15 +121,15 @@
 
 \subsubsection{Amount of flash memory}
 
-Linux can hardly fit in a 2MB flash device, once you have open the device and 
-located the flash chip, try to find other the Internet its characteristics. If
+Linux can hardly fit in a 2MB flash device, once you have opened the device and 
+located the flash chip, try to find its characteristics on the Internet. If
 your flash chip is a 2MB or less device, your device is most likely to run a 
 proprietary OS such as WindRiver VxWorks, or a custom manufacturer OS like Zyxel ZynOS.
 
-OpenWrt does not currently run on devices which have equal or less than 2MB of 
-flash memory. This limitation will probably not be worked around since those 
-devices are most of the time micro routers, or Wireless Access Points, which are
-not the main OpenWrt target.
+OpenWrt does not currently run on devices which have 2MB or less of flash memory.
+This limitation will probably not be worked around since those devices are most 
+of the time micro-routers, or Wireless Access Points, which are not the main 
+OpenWrt target.
 
 \subsubsection{Pluging a serial port}
 
@@ -140,8 +140,8 @@
 \subsection{Finding and using the manufacturer SDK}
 
 Once you are sure your device run a Linux based firmware, you will be able to start
-hacking on it. If the manufacturer respect the GPL, it will have release with the 
-device, a Sample Development Kit.
+hacking on it. If the manufacturer respected the GPL, it will have released a Sample
+Development Kit with the device.
 
 \subsubsection{GPL violations}
 
Index: docs/init-scripts.tex
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--- docs/init-scripts.tex       (revision 6226)
+++ docs/init-scripts.tex       (working copy)
@@ -24,8 +24,8 @@
 script should provide. \texttt{start()} is called when the user runs \texttt{/etc/init.d/httpd start}
 or (if the script is enabled and does not override this behavior) at system boot time.
 
-Enabling and disabling init scripts is done by running \texttt{/etc/init.d/\textit{name} start}
-or \texttt{/etc/init.d/\textit{name} stop}. This creates or removes symbolic links to the
+Enabling and disabling init scripts is done by running \texttt{/etc/init.d/\textit{name} enable}
+or \texttt{/etc/init.d/\textit{name} disable}. This creates or removes symbolic links to the
 init script in \texttt{/etc/rc.d}, which is processed by \texttt{/etc/init.d/rcS} at boot time.
 
 The order in which these scripts are run is defined in the variable \texttt{START} in the init

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docfixes.patch (2.7 KB) - added by framer99 10 years ago.
minor documentation fixes

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Change History (3)

Changed 10 years ago by framer99

minor documentation fixes

comment:1 Changed 10 years ago by nbd

  • Resolution set to fixed
  • Status changed from new to closed

added in [6319]

comment:2 Changed 2 years ago by jow

  • Milestone changed from Attitude Adjustment 12.09 to Barrier Breaker 14.07

Milestone Attitude Adjustment 12.09 deleted

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